tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post9135480114691129670..comments2011-06-09T13:19:35.967-04:00Comments on Ms. Carter's Blog: NoiseMs. Carterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09877785041514347544noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-5494089418686163012011-03-25T14:00:21.774-04:002011-03-25T14:00:21.774-04:00TD I really like your Ice poem. You used a good ch...TD I really like your Ice poem. You used a good choice of language in the sentence "Its so cold my fingers feel frozen".<br />HMCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-24811493487505851792011-03-25T13:54:30.570-04:002011-03-25T13:54:30.570-04:00HMC,
The poem wrapper was amazing! when I read it,...HMC,<br />The poem wrapper was amazing! when I read it,I felt like I was there. you made it sound very vivacious!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-68308628822794563162011-03-25T13:47:21.459-04:002011-03-25T13:47:21.459-04:00The Frog
The frog was sitting next to me,
On the ...The Frog<br /><br />The frog was sitting next to me,<br />On the beautiful green grass.<br />As I closed my eyes, I imagined<br />Me as a frog, making that lovely sound.<br /><br />*******************************<br /><br />Ice<br /><br />It’s so cold my fingers feel frozen,<br />I said as I was walking on the ice.<br />I felt so calm, and everything was quiet.<br />And then CRRRK! <br />As I jumped up I noticed<br />It was the ice, so I crack, crack, cracked it.<br /><br />TDAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-19718855590120001212011-03-25T13:43:10.332-04:002011-03-25T13:43:10.332-04:00Hail
Hail is falling hard
Against the chicken Coo...Hail<br /><br />Hail is falling hard<br />Against the chicken Coop roof. <br />The chickens <br />Squawk with fear that <br />The roof will<br />Burst.<br /><br />**********************<br /><br /><br />The Wrapper<br /><br />Kyle ate his cookie<br />Seven minutes ago <br />but was still staring <br />at the Wrapper. <br />Without a warning<br />He crumbles it up and <br />Rolls the wrapper in his hand<br />Just to annoy me.<br /><br />HMCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-22210676759725885482011-03-25T13:41:57.164-04:002011-03-25T13:41:57.164-04:00Sparks
Come on
I need a fire
click, click, click...Sparks<br /><br />Come on <br />I need a fire<br />click, click, click <br />I can’t <br />I need a fire <br />come on spark, <br />clank. <br />Yes a spark <br />come on <br />make a fire. <br />Yes <br />I might just make it<br />one day longer.<br /><br />dtAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-72755417732185453652011-03-25T13:24:29.900-04:002011-03-25T13:24:29.900-04:00The Wood Pecker
The woodpecker sings,
All day lon...The Wood Pecker<br /><br />The woodpecker sings,<br />All day long,<br />Never stopping to take a breath.<br />Just sings,<br />All day,<br />Till Dusk<br /><br />****************************<br /><br />B-r-r-r-i-n-g!<br /><br />The colorful music,<br />So colorful,<br />Chimed throughout the house,<br />So that everyone,<br />No matter where,<br />Would hear,<br />B-r-r-r-i-n-g, b-r-r-r-i-n-g<br /><br />ASAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-67007100266718556852011-03-24T14:55:17.460-04:002011-03-24T14:55:17.460-04:00The Storm
As the rain dripped
I watched as the fu...The Storm<br /><br />As the rain dripped<br />I watched as the fun<br />Washed away.<br />Now what?<br />Nothing to do,<br />Nothing to say, <br />I hear crack after crack.<br />All of a sudden <br />SMASH.<br />Nothing to do,<br />Nothing to say<br /><br />By JacobAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-36654173584699079402011-03-24T14:52:33.814-04:002011-03-24T14:52:33.814-04:00It is markers hitting each other
sounding like pi...It is markers hitting each other <br />sounding like pine cones in the fall.<br />If someone dropped a pen there would be a vibration.<br />You could hear the singing in your head.<br /><br />ACAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-82391926750627844152011-03-24T14:45:31.494-04:002011-03-24T14:45:31.494-04:00Rebuilding
It echoes like a person in Haiti
drumm...Rebuilding<br /><br />It echoes like a person in Haiti<br />drumming on recycled materials<br />hoping they will get pennies<br />to try and rebuild<br />the unrebuildable.<br /><br />FCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-52592910631438550502011-03-24T14:39:57.156-04:002011-03-24T14:39:57.156-04:00HW, your poem really had rich detail.
FCHW, your poem really had rich detail.<br /><br />FCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-53486896555744238122011-03-24T14:02:54.666-04:002011-03-24T14:02:54.666-04:00I slowly pulled the red ribbon off the gift.
I bro...I slowly pulled the red ribbon off the gift.<br />I brought up to my ear and shook.<br />It sounded like rocks rattling,<br />The excitement was growing.<br />The excitement that you always get on Christmas morning.<br />I thought I might savior this moment for a minute.<br />The wrapping paper covering the present had snowmen on it,<br />Their eyes as black as the coal from the fireplace.<br /> HWAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-34158021162160297752011-03-24T13:54:58.291-04:002011-03-24T13:54:58.291-04:00The phone call
All of a sudden
your phone starts...The phone call<br /><br />All of a sudden <br />your phone starts to go off, <br />it’s the mayor.<br />He wants to see you.<br /><br /><br /><br />Crumpled <br /><br />I saw garbage<br />on the floor <br />so I picked it up <br />and crumpled it <br />and then threw it away.<br /><br />DBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-31608224989538907272011-03-24T13:38:05.500-04:002011-03-24T13:38:05.500-04:00Noise Poems
Nothing Sound
It’s the nothing sound...Noise Poems<br /><br />Nothing Sound<br /><br />It’s the nothing sound<br />It’s a small and very quiet sound<br />It gets stuck in your head like your favorite song<br />If you want to know what it is it’s the faint ringing noise after some one screams in your ears<br />It’s also the reminder of nothing wiggling its way into your head.<br /> <br />Snow Drift<br /><br />I stroll down my drive way only hearing a similar crunching<br />I look down and say so this is the noise creating a musical rhythm behind my sad foot steps, that wash away through the bone chilling snow drifts with in the 3 second,<br />There’s only the smallest trace that you have been walking though your tracks this whole time not knowing were you’ve actually been.<br /> ConradAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-69087818083132077012011-03-24T13:36:05.967-04:002011-03-24T13:36:05.967-04:00Rock against Rock = Fire
Click, click, click
Just ...Rock against Rock = Fire<br />Click, click, click<br />Just one spark,<br />Grows bigger<br />Until<br />Fire!<br /><br />GJAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-67339495905539865222011-03-24T13:34:22.954-04:002011-03-24T13:34:22.954-04:00Heels
Her heals clicked,
On the runway,
Click, cl...Heels<br /><br />Her heals clicked,<br />On the runway,<br />Click, click, click, <br />Tapping as she walked,<br />Further,<br />And further,<br />Away. <br /><br />MMAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-8026716304888423602011-03-24T13:31:13.294-04:002011-03-24T13:31:13.294-04:00Fall Leaves
Fall leaves glide to the ground.
A...Fall Leaves <br /><br />Fall leaves glide to the ground. <br /><br />All the colors of the rainbow. <br /><br />Lower and lower the leaves glide the forest flour, <br />hopping to avoid being stomped on by a careless animal passing by. <br /><br />Lovely leaves, gone until next fall, almost gone forever <br />almost gone forever. <br /><br />KBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-46764781762751633662011-03-24T13:30:26.799-04:002011-03-24T13:30:26.799-04:00Wood Pecker
In the woods
I was walking when I saw...Wood Pecker<br /><br />In the woods<br />I was walking when I saw a wood pecker<br /> pecking at a tree trying to make his home.<br /> And the next year I went back to those same woods<br /> and I swear that I saw that same wood pecker<br /> pecking against that same tree.<br /><br />mwAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-7311815634079984382011-03-24T13:28:08.765-04:002011-03-24T13:28:08.765-04:00RAIN
The rain came,
First soft, then steadily fast...RAIN<br />The rain came,<br />First soft, then steadily faster,<br />Beating against the rusty<br />Tin roof.<br /><br />LEAF<br />Taken by the wind,<br />It is blown.<br />Through the gutters,<br />And across the streets,<br />Unnoticed.<br />Rolling farther,<br />And farther,<br />Away.<br /> -BKAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-53560734191934275142011-03-24T13:15:57.402-04:002011-03-24T13:15:57.402-04:00The clock
The clock
Ticked intill
Out shoot
The ...The clock<br /><br />The clock <br />Ticked intill<br />Out shoot<br />The bird 12 oclock<br />Sharp ding dong<br />Ding dong ding <br /> Dong ding<br />NGAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-54186117847123108012011-03-24T13:14:09.232-04:002011-03-24T13:14:09.232-04:00Noise Poem
Clash of the Critters
The little click...Noise Poem<br /><br />Clash of the Critters<br />The little clicking<br />noise sounded like<br />a ton of warring bugs.<br />each with a sword,<br />fighting for its life.<br /><br />WAAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-68095126004200056642011-03-24T13:13:51.256-04:002011-03-24T13:13:51.256-04:00Flood
Crashing hard,
Faint sounds of fire trucks....Flood<br /><br />Crashing hard,<br />Faint sounds of fire trucks.<br />Screams for help,<br />But know one to help, what should I do, <br />Help,<br />Stay safe,<br />I don’t know. JBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-33629647654438032592011-03-24T13:12:21.722-04:002011-03-24T13:12:21.722-04:00Drops
Drip,
Drip,
Drip,
Slowly
It
Stops,
To be
A...Drops<br />Drip,<br />Drip,<br />Drip,<br />Slowly<br />It <br />Stops,<br />To be <br />Awakened<br />Again<br />Only<br />By<br />More<br />Of its<br />Kind.<br />-EliAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-18533297252708862302011-03-24T13:09:00.887-04:002011-03-24T13:09:00.887-04:00The rain,
Dropping onto the porch,
In little dropl...The rain,<br />Dropping onto the porch,<br />In little droplets,<br />From the roof,<br />Like little explosions,<br />They land.<br />-----------------------<br />The jangle of the corn,<br />Could be heard,<br />Over the meadows,<br />One by one,<br />The cows slowly appeared,<br />Over the hill,<br />Waiting for their food.<br /><br />SWAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1343792470722019992.post-30553360268027543872011-03-24T13:07:09.079-04:002011-03-24T13:07:09.079-04:00Rain
The torrent of
Rain c...Rain<br /> The torrent of<br /> Rain came fast<br /> Like a cheetah,<br />Then slowly dying<br />Of old<br />Age.<br /><br />-EliAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com